4-Barrel stroke variation

[golfer24]

Hi,
Finally starting to understand the maximum participation swing and feel it is getting closer than ever before. Could i have your opinion please?

 

[Brian Manzella]

You need to keep your "bowtie" back through impact.

You are losing Axis Tilt as you hit the ball. STAY BACK!!!!

Also, your hips are fairly closed late in your downswing.

 

[golfer24]

Thanks Brian. More courage needed to keep the axis tilt.