Here's a friendly suggestion. Give the readers some background.
Things like, handicap, number of years playing golf, have you, are you taking lessons,
are you familiar with golf instruction lingo, what is your typical miss (slice, hook, etc.),
how far did that 4 iron carry, maybe how far do you hit your 9 iron, etc.
Another very helpful thing is for you to tell the readers what you think is causing your
problem of less than ideal contact. Your answer should guide the complexity of the
suggestions you receive.