my swing on youtube

[customworksking]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=obyWV6yqyH8
have a look

 

[lia41985]

Well, you're obviously big and strong. That net really seems to shake so you're probably hitting the ball hard. You look fairly stiff and reverse pivot. Can't see to much else. You're likely a good candidate for the "Never Slice Again" pattern. With your athletic attributes and that pattern, you're progress will be quick. Best of luck to you.

 

[self-mastery]

Where do your bad shots land?

 

[Chris Sturgess]

The first thing you should work on is not swaying your hips on the backswing. Pause your youtube video at the top of your backswing, check out how your right shin is vertical. That is bad. It means you're sliding and not turning enough. Your right leg should pretty much be in a line angled inward throughout the whole backswing. Like this pic of Tiger here, keep your right leg like that and turn around it. This should also result in your back being at a slight angle away from the target at the top as well, with your butt being slightly closer to the target than your shoulders.

 

[James Marshall (Hogan1953)]

Your right hand palm appears to be facing up too much which could cause you to close the clubface.

Backswing looks a bit long and loose.

Hip shift in the backswing giving you a lot of work in the downswing too get left