Here's the link to a down-the-line swing taken this afternoon after work.
http://208.4.16.129/20051005.avi
If you don't have time to download it, below are some crappy screen shots that I took along with my comments. The video is much clearer than the screenshots.
In summary, I think I have good rhythm, balance, and a fairly steady head. I also have a flat left wrist and decent lag - not max trigger delay or anything like that - but I have the clubhead trailing my hands post impact.
I need that elusive straight plane line from the top down to impact. See below.
Again, don't hold back...your input is appreciated.
address - balanced.
takeaway - a little under plane - pretty good though - club tracking pretty much up the shaft plane angle.
halfway back - on plane - shifted up to elbow plane. Feel and Real sure aren't the same. In this swing I was attempting to "feel" like I was taking the club up the green line, turned shoulder plane. Homer says the elbow plane is used primarily subconsciously. He's right in this case.
top - on plane and pretty close to my desired plane angle - the turned shoulder plane angle. I like what I see up to this point.
end - reaching a bit too far. Club laid off a little. Not sure why the club gets laid-off like this. Chronic problem.
Here's where it gets interesting - an off plane start down. I am
attempting</u> to swing the club straight down turned shoulder plane (green line). It's no where close.
Grip end of club on elbow plane, clubhead on hands plane. By impact this gets corrected.
right forearm and clubshaft perfectly on elbow plane.
shaft on-plane on the other side of the ball.
balanced at the finish.