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Eminem

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Ive decided to compose a poem....


Bare trees flutter in the distance with a rumble of dark fear
You look down standing on the thick muddy ground beside your feet
Feeling the deepest darkest rushing flow through your body
Hands pressed towards the sun hidden behind the certain blackness
An eminating cold opening from the wilderness pushing you back


While everything is caught up in the storm, a light peers from the thunderous madness
The wet grass is reflecting the sun, showing natures true awe radience
The beautiful valleys, a greatness from God bestowed upon us
Burdens swept away and pain suffered ends, the time for peace and joy has become


Those that allow the love and peace forfil their soul will know the greatness as standing there in the harmony
As beauty is all around us and we are all partied to it everyday and forget that every day that you live your time is running out
The proverbial clock ticking every second, all that matters is that you make a difference now in your time here on earth
As my heaven awaits, lay I rest my soul forever to hold
No regrets, No stories untold...
 

Eminem

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quote:Originally posted by 6bee1dee

quote:Originally posted by Eminem

Did no one like my poem ? :(

I did, but laugh more. Something must make you smile.

The poem was about hope mainly when facing depression. I think I might take out the last line though rereading it... the line is a bit like ...said b4....
 
quote:Originally posted by Eminem

quote:Originally posted by 6bee1dee

quote:Originally posted by Eminem

Did no one like my poem ? :(

I did, but laugh more. Something must make you smile.

The poem was about hope mainly when facing depression. I think I might take out the last line though rereading it... the line is a bit like ...said b4....

The last two lines were kinda final. I wanted to call the paramedics?
haha :D.
 
I thought this was a golf forum, not a crappy poem forum. Must have taken a wrong turn at Albuquerque.

Awful poem, just dreadful.
 
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