Yes, this a classic case of a pretty darn good swing with a few mistimed pieces.
If your club would go out more early, the left arm flying wedge would have to rotate more to the top and you would porbably not steepen it early. What that means is your
hands from the top need to go a bit more out early (carry) with some reverse rotation of the club to lay it down a bit.
Then you could steepen it by working the left hand in the 2nd phase and through by working the left hand back.
It was a lesson review. But it was good enough to poset up. Glad folks like it. The player is superior player and din't need any real explanations beyond what was on the piece.
Lots of so-so players need to learn to learn the proper first two phases of the downswing....
Phase 1: Pull early, reverse beta/tumble.
Phase 2: Left hand in clubhead side over—steepening tumble)
...before they can work on the last—through impact—phase...
Phase 3: Negative Alpha (pulling the top end of the grip back), Negative Beta & Positive Gamma (all summing up to ("Going Normal").
Why?
BECAUSE THE EITHER HAVE THE FACE OPEN or it used to be and even after they "fixed it" they still have remnants of the old "over the top move" (steepening early, with POSITIVE BETA and not enough pull).
If they don't learn to do phase 1 correctly (pulling and laying the shaft down), they shouldn't THINK about trying to fix phase 2 (the Tumble).
So pretty much, you were wrong.
A simple apology will do.
Like I said.
Not even close.
Are you a hacker or a hacker teacher playing the part of hacker in the movie?
Listen, if you shallow late, you might DIVE AT THE BALL with forward bend and backed up hips and take a divot the size of a Ruth Chris' Porterhouse.
And that too....
Read the above, and if you don't understand it, you can by the next video.